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Poetry: Comfort by ~Kilraq:iconKilraq:

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There she was, a tragedy
a tear streamed love for me
I held her hand so gently
carried her to solidarity

Oh that her eyes could see the beauty I did see

Broken and bruised, disdained and abused,
for all eyes to see
but 'neath that exterior
An angel I didst see

Oh that her eyes could see the beauty I did see

Sorrow and pain and woes she threw
in pain she wished to be
but underneath these banshee cries
was the women I didst see

Oh that her eyes could see the beauty I did see

Warm her, hold her, clean and free her
All I sought for this meek
But misery was now her world, the angel couldn't breathe

Oh that her eyes could see the beauty I did see

Upward then my words did go
For my comfort was not enough
Angels are only freed
By the Lord of all that's Love

Oh that her eyes could see the beauty I did see

But leave her side
Oh no not me
For you must all now see
This angel now has captured me

Oh that her eyes could see the beauty I did see
©2005-2009 ~Kilraq
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Submitted: October 7, 2005
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Sometimes in life ones is presented with choices. This is a poem about such a choice. Hope you enjoy.
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~Hellbound-Catz:iconHellbound-Catz: Oct 8, 2005, 10:13:03 PM
Thats so beautiful!! I didnt know you were such a poet!! Now, who is this angel you speek of? ^.^ I'd like to meet her and congradulate her.

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"Everything here is eatable, even I'm eatable. But that, my children, is called cannibalism and it is frowned upon in most societies."
~urgulgania:iconurgulgania: Oct 10, 2005, 6:35:24 PM
Thats really beautiful, very nice job.

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Save a horse Ride a cowboy!

It's hard to bitch with a mouthfull of lobster.
~Kilraq:iconKilraq: Oct 13, 2005, 12:52:21 AM
*Smiles* Thanks

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"It is our choices that choose our life. We can blame it on no one except ourselves. Where we go, what we ate, who we choose to have relations with, these our the choices that decide our life. So be careful with your choices. They are all you have."
~purplep4nther:iconpurplep4nther: Oct 13, 2005, 9:17:20 PM
A gorgeous poem. I'm also curious to know who this angel is :)
*jim100bg:iconjim100bg: Oct 19, 2005, 9:16:47 PM
beautiful, just awwww.

Buzz - :salute:

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Buzz - :salute:

Good character is doing the right thing when no ones looking.

:daprints: [link]
~Kilraq:iconKilraq: Oct 20, 2005, 1:03:26 AM
*Quirks eyebrow* The poetic soul? Interesting... XD

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"It is our choices that choose our life. We can blame it on no one except ourselves. Where we go, what we ate, who we choose to have relations with, these our the choices that decide our life. So be careful with your choices. They are all you have."
*Melens-rayne:iconMelens-rayne: Oct 20, 2005, 9:54:05 AM
This is really beautiful. The emotion you portray is awesome. Only, a suggestion? If you're trying to keep a rhythm in the structure, you may want to rework some of the stanzas a little. If not, it's beautful as is :)

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You have to be the change you want to see in the world.
~ Gandhi
~Kilraq:iconKilraq: Oct 20, 2005, 10:03:50 AM
*Smiles* I was going for that, but for unnamed reasons, leaving it as is. :) Thanks

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"It is our choices that choose our life. We can blame it on no one except ourselves. Where we go, what we ate, who we choose to have relations with, these our the choices that decide our life. So be careful with your choices. They are all you have."
Mood: Tender =Soul0st:iconSoul0st: Nov 21, 2006, 12:40:03 PM
Just wanted to say, thank you for this poem love.
Never got to sayin'that before..
♥

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He's calling the hump, Walt!
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